Sunday, August 25, 2013

Crossfire

Notice and Focus + Ranking
Step 1
 Jon Stewart, who is a guest, begins with questioning to the panelists. The two panels continuously interrupt when Jon Stewart says something. They insult each other. The conversation is very heated. Jon Stewart uses humor to avoid their attack. His humor is often self-deprecating. They are accusing each other. They are not being logical. They are not looking for solution, but they just debate to win.
Step 2
 Neutral attitude of Jon Stewart, Jon Stewart’s use of humors, Interruptions of the panels.
Step 3
 The neutral attitude of Jon Stewart contrasts him with the biased panels, making his arguments more credible and logical. It makes his accusation to the program ‘Crossfire’ much more critical to the bow tie panel’s accusation to Jon Stewart’s program. Jon Stewart’s humors efficiently cut the opponent’s attacks and cool down the atmosphere of the debate. The interruptions to the opponent make the opponent lose his points, and make the opponent not be able to speak what he wants to speak. Thus, those interruptions make the debate overheated and off the point.

The Method
Step 1: Repetition
Why we fight?, Is he the best?, Hurting America, Stop, Suck up, Not serious, Please
Step 2: Strands
Crossfire-I’m-gonna-kick-your-ass, Bad-Hurtful, Argue-Fight, Suck up-Butt Boy, Bad-Hurtful-disingenuous
Step 3: Binary oppositions
CNN/Comedy central, Debate Show/Theater, Lecture people/Politicians
Step 4: Debate show/Theater

 Jon Stewart argues that Crossfire is a theater, instead of debate show. It is the most important binary opposition because this is a key point of Jon Stewart’s accusation to Crossfire. Debate show, as Jon Stewart’s argument, should be helpful and serious. Instead, Jon Stewart says that Crossfire is being a ‘theater’ which is fake and made up of actors. So this binary opposition strongly criticizes Crossfire of not being helpful and hurting America.
 Step 5
 Debate and Fight seems to be strands, but Jon Stewart uses this two words in opposite meaning. According to Jon Stewart, debate is a helpful way of finding solutions and exchanging opinions. In contrast, fight is a meaningless insulting and arguments, which is 'Crossfire'

So What?
 In the video Crossfire, Jon Stewart accuses the program of being 'bad for America'. Of course, Crossfire is a debate show. However, using the word 'theater' Jon Stewart implies that 'Crossfire' is not a real debate show. He reveals that what they are doing is not a debate, but just a fight full of insulting. Thus the argument leads the audience to re-define the meaning of 'debate' and to realize how wrong the program is. 

Wednesday, August 21, 2013

First post

When I get an essay assignment, I usually procrastinate till it’s due in few days. When I think of an idea, I usually go to a quiet place, such as library, to not be disturbed. First I brainstorm what to write in the essay. When I got a basic idea of it, I make an outline of my essay. Then I write a rough draft and then write the actual essay. Then I read it again and revise it. I prefer typing the essay because my typing is much faster than my handwriting and also because my handwriting is pretty bad. Sometimes if the essay is too difficult, I write the essay in Korean first and then rewrite it in English. That way I can see how my essay goes more clearly and so I can organize it better. The most difficult part of writing an essay for me is finding proper words that would fit in sentence and writing the sentence in correct structure. (I had to search Korean-English dictionary to find the word ‘proper’). English is my second language, so in many times I can think of a Korean word that fits perfectly but can’t think of the word in English. Also, I often find it impossible to translate a sentence which is grammatically correct in Korean into English grammatically correctly. Sometimes, a sentence becomes very childish when I translate it to English. Beginning an essay is always very difficult too. I often just look at an empty paper until I come up with an idea of what to write. When I can’t figure out one at that moment, I often stop thinking about the essay and try to read anything that is not related to the topic of an essay. Then in few hours an idea comes up to my brain almost incidentally. That is the moment essay writing is the easiest. I begin to write an essay really quickly and the sentence goes fluent. Usually the moment is gone in few minutes and I find myself being not able to understand my own essay. Ending an essay is also very difficult. Actually, writing an essay is a task full of difficulties. I can’t think of an ending for this essay. Okay that’s it.